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.Independence.You were like the strangest sickness, Your salient presence tore me apart, But your soothing words were a pain relieving drug..Independence.
Slowly I became addicted to those words, Blind to my poor heart's pain. Yet each time you left me you took those words away, Left me crippled, wounded and suffering. Then you'd return to give me relief again, And each time it seemed sweeter and sweeter.
So I distanced myself from you, Stayed hidden and alone, Bearing the pain on my own, Brushing away reminders of the things you said. Until the pain was gone, And only scar


SmashedThe port, the rum, the wine, It seems as if life's fine. The glamour of this social class, Seen through the bottom of a glass.Smashed
The wine, the port, the rum, And in your ears a low dull hum, As pressure builds from here and there, As fumes intoxicate the air.
The rum, the wine, the port, Your lifespan seems a bit more short. And you cannot help but to see, The bitter twists in your reality.


Ode To A Broken PlateFool me once, shame on you, Fool me twice, shame on me. You haven't fooled me three times yet, I wish you'd set me free.Ode To A Broken Plate
My words have gone to tatters now, My thoughts become unclear. The day you left I lost my muse, The one I held most dear.
Life's hard to live through twists and turns, Soaring heights and endless falls, When all the bright live photos are, To my blind eyes: blank walls.


Crying Over Small DeathsShe'd hide away there, in darkness and cold, Escape from her fears and slowly grow old. No one could find her and no one would try, In the land where ladybugs went to die.Crying Over Small Deaths
All it was made of was stairs of cement, With trees hanging over all broken and bent. Away from the glass door the girl sat to cry, In the land where ladybugs went to die.
And no one cared enough to try, To find her when she wanted to die. She always looked so ready to cry. So she would hide away, Til the end of the day, In the land where, Ladybugs went to die.
It
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